Hello WapoleLanguray!
As I stepped into castle Wolfenstein, I had a few thoughts:
1. Love the Wolfenstein meets League of Extraordinary Gentlemen vibe! Super fun already.
2. The monsters look like fun to play. There is also a bit of comedy to their banes which I enjoy. Two small things. You need a line return between Rules and Monster. You also need one for the Mummy's Banes. Otherwise, very nice.
3. Mechanics wise, I recognize the Honey Heist in this one. But you've changed it enough with the flavor that it is transformative. I like that you use d10s. A little confused about what happens to a character when they fail?
4. The entire page for Castle Damonstein... IS SO GOOD! All the tables are flavorful and tone setting.
Overall, great job! This looks like a lot of fun for fans of monster movies and classic Wolfenstein. Clear a few things up and I think you got it!