I like it, the story is interesting and the characters are good from afar, I already want to see how you develop the story, the character and story of the characters, only one thing you could change the style of the letter, the android cell text is difficult to read when you italicize it pixelated a lot that the letter looks blurred and is difficult to read, if you could make it a little bigger and / or change the style of the letter it should improve that, except for that the rest I like I hope to see how this advance this project