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The concept is good. I see no reason why this should be in the NSFW Section honestly. However, the messages of everyone needs to be fixed to where it's irl instead of text messages and shorting of words. That ruins it pretty much. 

Also there's no story and newer players are instantly wondering what to do. I had no clue what to do and it needs to work. No Introduction or what you should be doing as well. This isn't really good as in right now but hopefully it is better in the future. Also the landscaping is a bit excessive. It takes pretty much way too long to get to one place

It's hard to know who you can interact and who you can't interact with and there's no map since this place is large as fuck

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I would like to thank you for your constructive criticism. The game was created as a joke by a character I made up named Emily. A 13 year old girl who really likes wolves. That does not excuse the problems with the game though. Some things like the way the characters talk is intentional as it is how I imagine a 13 year old girl talks online, with all the grammar mistakes like wrong "your/you're" and such.

There is a story although it was not meant to be as unclear as it is. I assume that you didn't get very far in the game then because then you would know why it's in the NSFW section. This is a slight spoiler but later in the story, I break out of the "Emily" character and start talking with proper English around the time that the NSFW content appears. I don't want to go into any further detail than that because it will spoil it even more.

I well tell you this, the Sand Pack is the first place you have to go to to talk to someone. That place is directly south of the Forest Pack. And the Swamp Pack is on the top-right corner of the world. Some of these issues are not intentional and I may fix them. Maybe I will make a map or make dialog for the NPCs that don't have any and they can give hints or something.

Again thanks for the review. It has got me thinking of ways to improve the game.

Well, this makes more sense somewhat. But I seriously did not catch on to it being a joke, or it being from the perspective of a 13 year old. I actually thought you made it as an intentional middle finger to the people who were downloading it. This explains things a little. But yeah, it definitely needs more dialog and hints from characters and definitely a world map and minimap.