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The concept is innovative, and the 3D visuals are fantastic! There are a few things to mention though:

1) The music would stutter when switching scenes (since I was playing the HTML5 build. So you should've loaded scenes asynchronously.

2) Whilst the 3D visuals are great, the UI of the dialogs were very eye-straining for me and I could barely read the white text on a bright screen.

3) The movement felt kind of weird. I wish the player wouldn't stop when turning around. I feel like it can be improved in many ways.

Other than that, you did a good job!

Hi Danial, thank you for the precise and honest review. A quick reply:
1. The scenes ARE loaded asynchronous, but I am afraid the music file was too big.

2. I created a Narrative UI object with black text, but for some reason the white one mostly loads first (causing the second to die :( )
3. Yes, the movement isn't on par. This because I created my own blendtree and movement script. It was a trade off, but as you say, it can (and will) be improved.

After the jam rating ends, I will update the game with all the remarks below (and some I got through other channels). I am very grateful for the constructive feedback.