I like the story idea and I like that it has simple controls and many different levels, starting with a tutorial. For me the platforming was a bit too challenging, but I'm also not very good at games. I kept being able to jump 90% of the way and then falling down right before reaching the platform, so it would have been helpful for the platforms to be like .5 cm closer together. Overall, though, this looks awesome for a game jam game where you made all the assets from scratch!