Things I liked, Your art style in this is fabulous! You do a very good job of giving the environment color and life despite the limited palette and you still are able to distinguish objects to the player that they can interact with. Your whole world in this game has a ton of life and narrative in it and that's awesome considering a lot of games in this jam tend to forgo that.
Things I didn't like, sadly your UI scaling was a bit wonkey, Its actually really impressive you made a dialogue system and everything but you could use some proper space allocation when it comes to your inventory and your escape menu. It was also difficult to figure out how to combine information I had on hand. I eventually figured it out but it took a bit and that's never a barrier you want to give the player. Also your game crashed when I used the hand tool on the computer in the second room.
Overall though I really liked your game and I definitely believe it deserves more ratings than what its getting. Keep making games and I look forward to what you make next!
- Von Harley