This a super fun idea for a story, with some nice music and awesome art!
My only suggestions or thoughts after playing for a bit would be:
-Maybe a start screen? Although this is more just for normies sake so feel free to ignore, it was just startling to have it jump into the game asap.
-Being able to save and or load the game? Just from a player perspective, it might make it easier if you're playing for a while and hafta leave before you finish whatever path your on.
-In the main screen, with the location: Maybe when you highlight a location on the map it highlights the matching name for the area on the Left side of the screen?((I knew where home, alley, park, and bar were by guessing. But! I couldn't tell what was 'store' and what was 'work' because I didn't know what Vlads work was gonna look like.))
-Correct some of the text with spellcheck, and make sure the text is over the continue button. I had a few lines that were throwing me for a loop because either they were misspelled or I was just missing chunks of texts altogether.
-Maybe explain the mechanics of the game either in the game or on this page.. I felt kinda lost with the time progression. How many acts can you do before it changes the week? Can I only go home once?? These are things that should probably be up for the players to see. It can be frustrating to hafta hash all that out as the player without any sort of hints or tutorial.
-If it's possibly, maybe list endings on this page: Just the amount of different endings you can get kinda thing, no details.
I hope my suggestions aren't too harsh: I ADORE THIS CONCEPT AND THE CHARACTERS THAT I GOT TO INTERACT WITH IN THE STORY SO FAR, AS WELL AS THE DIALOUGUE THAT WAS IN PROPER SENTENCE FORMAT. I cannot stress this enough...
I really hope this game gets tweaked and updated because this is game that I could waste some serious time on, draw fanart for, really all the things. Definitely watching this game and sarahsalad as a dev, like a lil' gamer hawk. Can't wait to see what you make next~