My thoughts while playing this game:
- The game needs a little bit of a spelling/grammar check. It's not hard to understand, just annoying.
+ A game-making sim? That's different!
+ This story is funny.
- I'm not a fan of choice boxes with no default selection
+ I like how you loop back to a decision point after getting one of the earlier endings so you don't have to go through all of the text again.
+ OMG WHAT HAROLD...not gonna spoil it, but the plot twist is amazing!
+ "Voice acting." Nice.
+ The plot twists keep coming. I love it!
- Is the mapping made with parallax or grid-free doodads? The map doesn't line up with where the icons are.
- Why no Harold battle sprite? Even blowing up a Harold sprite would have made a better enemy sprite.
I did multiple playthroughs, so the thoughts may seem a little out of order. "+" are for things I liked, "-" are for things I didn't like.
Overall, I enjoyed this game and got a few laughs in. Good job!