Thank you so much for playing!
I'm glad you got multiple playthroughs out of it - I wasn't sure whether the other branches would be interesting enough for it.
For the abrupt end of the OM's and YO's story, that's a great catch - I'll see if I can set an automatic look command so the room description pops back up.
Would it help readability if there was a line break between each paragraph?
Hey, no worries, thanks for the doing the same!
I think it plays in well that you get different insight on what each character is thinking, with the different choices. (I went back and tried a few more). It was interesting to see the difference in how they talked.
I think some line breaks might help. At least, if players want to go back and reread over, or hit continue all at once like me. During the initial phase the continue button was a good break point as well.
