Holy moly! The story, the art, even the background music!! GAH THIS SUSPENSE IS GONNA KILL ME.
The only thing I would suggest is a way to make the text go by faster or at least not rely on the tiny triangle to skip dialogue. Like, a larger area to click on or even keys to advance texts instead. Or even the ability to go back to the journal throughout the gameplay so that players can read it over again.
Other than that, I wonder how many games you'll make to take us on this epic journey to figure out the shady dealings of Relief Eternal :D I can't wait!