Very interesting entry. Learning the controls at first is confusing, even with the help overlay, because the player starts in a formless void and really can't tell where they're moving to because they have no landmarks to compare their position with. However once I figured it out I really enjoyed the rest. The poems are great, and fit together well. The character model and animations are very detailed, and very well done. The environments you created really connected with the emotions of the poetry (even the confusion in the beginning can be seen as fitting the poetry - an
"unconquerable soul" will figure it out and keep playing till they get it. :)
So good work on a more experimental entry. I liked it a lot, just wanted to give helpful and honest feedback based on my experience.