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Hello Kridox, thanks for playing my game, here's the feedback that I promised to your game, I might a bit harsh but you can just skip/delete this comment if you don't want to see this. I know you're 13 years old but still...

FEEDBACK:

  • COLLISION DETECTION isn't good. As also said by Blue Cactus Games, the collision isn't good and it is jittery when the player walks on certain platforms.
  • The MOVING PLATFORM can't be transport me along with it. It moves on its own and when I tried to jump on it hoping it would transport me to the other side, it just didn't happen.
  • The CHARACTER'S MOVEMENT feels off. Did you use the Rigidbody2D? Some tutorials teach stuff about the Rigidbody2D with a clunky movement. This puts the players off. If you know Brackeys then you must go to Jonas Tyroller YouTube channel and search for his 2D Platformer, there he will teach you stuffs about this.
  • The PIXEL ART of the game is decent but you can improve it by going to the opengameart.org and get really cool pixel arts if you're not an artist.
  • But overall, this is really good game, in a short amount of time you made the UI and the Ending Part, kudos for you.

And I just wanted you to know that congratulations on making your first game within 7 days. I finished your game by the way. It was fun to know that a 13 years old made it.

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Omg thank you for your feedback m8. Your amazing... u actually inspired m in a way and I am sure that I can will do better in the futurr