So much to do in this game! Really cool! The nature of the game and the fact that it's playable with mouse input only would make it a really cool game for mobile devices. Maybe that's a direction you might want to explore? Also quite interesting that both our games look quite similar (besides the colors). So that's another point on the plus side for me :D But I'll have to say I like the animations of your menus and stuff better. That looks great! Music is also pretty cool. Two things that could be improved imho:
- Probably personal preference but I really don't like long story scenes right at the start of the game. That makes me want to skip it since I want to have some gameplay before I decide to invest myself into a story. Might be okay for other people though
- The sound for selecting stuff could be a bit more lower in tone. I think it's a bit too high pitched and therefore gets a bit annoying over time.
As you can see I was struggling to find something that you could have done better or different. Really solid and polished entry. Good job!