Congratulations on finishing your 2nd game ever! I can tell you have put a lot of thought, heart and soul into this game.
If you keep practicing and keep making games I'm sure you will nail some of the finer details which I think people will expect in a story-based game, such as the ability to show all the text when pressing E, instead of going to the next line. I found the text scroll speed was too low for me.
I liked exploring the little farm and village and reading the different texts on each object. I hope you keep making games, and telling stories.