I really liked the story of the game! The dialogue was very creative and funny! It would be nice to see a full game like that! Here's a few tips that might help if u want to continue this project:
- The player has no invencibility, so when I hit something more than one life was taken away.
- I felt like if the player horizontal velocity was a little bit faster, i would feel more controll over the game. The jump is floaty, so maybe increasing gravity value would fix that.
- Sound effects and player feedback like screenshakes or knockback would be nice.
- Every time that i shot, a line was formed behind the player, and no feedback that the bullets were coming out from the gun appeared. That made me think that maybe the game was trying to teach me to shoot looking to the opposite direction. Not sure if that was a bug that appeared only for me thought.
But good job! You are very creative.