I would love to play it if texts are more readable and polished.
The scrolling text is way too slow that it's slower than nominal reading speed.
And I think the font size can be larger for easy reading.
Also, next time making dialogues, I believe it's better to use just one button , like "spacebar" , for all the readings control, similar to typical RPGs FinalfFantasy dragonquest whatever.
Lastly, one fun fact, I thought the BLESS ME title was your game at first and was waiting for it to load Lol.
But I agree this game has its charm, I think you created the atmosphere successfully. Keep it up!