The one critique which seems to be common here is that the actual game mechanics don't support the narrative as well as they should. I would suggest adding more variety of "mini-games" each tailored to fit the narrative of the moment in narrative that it goes with. The art style is quite nice as well as the sound. the narration is not bad but i expect it to get better with practice :) (voice-acting is not easy so kudos). I loved that i could choose to walk "backwards" (Left) which breaks the norm of right being forward. so going with the norm is like clinging to the past and going left is trying something new.