Hello!
Would you say that this particular timing was enjoyable?
As for the writing, the large majority of it was spit out pretty quickly. As far as comments about the mansion go, I assume you mean the "whoah, shiny" attitude the detective has? There are multiple points where I do that and yeah, I realize that may get repetitive
I had multiple people report this issue and I'll look into it. It's the only bug that's been reported so even if I don't end up expanding the game I want to get it fixed after the jam.