Oh boy here we go.
-The camera is REALLY overbearing. This autocamera isn't great and more manual camera control would be preferred. Hold down and you'll see what I mean.
-Collecting things isn't as fun as it should be. Needs particles and a juicer sound.
-Sometimes you can do a glitchy double jump to get on top of an object.
-The game needs more spice to it, probably in the form of addition moves. It's not all that fun atm.
Overall, solid core, but the game bored me to death. These are all fixable things, so I'm looking forward to seeing you in the future! Keep up the good progress!