This is really pretty!
The 3D perspective is very neat, but it does create some difficulty in moving. I can't jump the first gap, as I can't seem to jump while moving. I did finally manage to get a jump towards the gap, but ended up just falling off the map. XD
The music is very nice and calm, but I'm not sure it meshes with the narrative tone. Still, very pretty.
The art is amazing, and the story seems quite interesting. I'm looking forward to a more complete version!