This had me laughing out loud! XD I wish I knew how to do all those cool coding things, like the text appearing slowly one after another. So cool!
Yeah I just started using Twine and I've been digging into macros and hooks and all that lately.
Was this made in Sugarcube? I'm still new so I'm using Harlowe. I really love the effect of starting with one passage and having it automatically shift to a new one, you can make some really cool stuff with that!