I know this is a text game so i should focus my comments on the story itself but, i really fell in love with this interface, its really well designed.
The mechanics and the fighting system are both really fun, hope to see more of them in the future.
I think that at this point what i really miss in the game is more content, to feel more of the game. Also, do you ever plan to compile an executable version? Or just release a downloadable html version or somthing like that?
Anyways, great game