Thanks! Yeah, wandering more would be good. Had to thin it out to its base structure b/c time, but the tools I'm using for it I'm also using in other projects so it lets me build stuff pretty fast. The structure was a riff on the sorts of 'some absurd story in an exoticized land' things. I guess the whole 'well this story isn't real in the story' thing could get old, but I kind of like it here, then again I could have just been playing it safe from a misinterpretation standpoint. The sorts of safeguards I built in because the subject matter I haven't read enough on, plus the time limit, I suppose.