For something you did in 5 minutes, this is good. And if your purpose for the music is a simple background melody for a video game, then it works well. But I agree with cinetic—it lacks direction. It doesn't remind me of anything or inspire me to think of something new.
If you spent some more time on this, used some of the motifs and melodies, and built it into a score, then it could be really good. Thanks for submitting it to the jam!