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Looking good! The art really helps, and the placeholder elements are really promising. One thing I would suggest is to perhaps clarify the implicit lore a bit. What's the difference between The angel of death, and death itself? Is death something that occurs naturally, or another character we don't know yet? Similarly, I believe it would be interesting if, at the beginning, the angel is taking to you as if you DID remember apocalypse. For example, when it says "wolf-like creatures", he could say the name of the actual species, fully in the expectation that you know what that is. It seems like a small detail, but in order to the angel of death to be full-fledged character, he needs to change a bit with you. You already do some of that, and I know the new arc will add some of that, so it seems you know what you are doing. Keep it up!

Okay! That all makes sense. I'll work on clarifying everything a bit.

Thank you so much! :)