I found Melancholy Love from an ad I saw and it immediately peaked my interest.
I played through the demo and I honestly think it's decent. There are some flaws like how some of the writing doesn't make much sense in English (most likely due to translation issues) and how I was slightly confused during most of the story.
It's hard to tell if what a character is saying should be taken literally or figuratively. Some of the story points seem to swing back and forth like a metronome and it ends up confusing the reader, like how it seems to be (unintentionally?) implied that Mianxue is romantically interested in her cousin and so on.
Putting these points aside, Melancholy Love seems to have a very interesting plot line from what I can tell and I really love the art!
For the demo I'll rate it a 6/10. I'll definitely play the full game when in comes out. Keep up the good work!