Really really lovely storytelling and world building. I can really see a lot of growth here from the previous versions. You’re taking into account design choices, story progression, and integrating art that compliments it. The overall feel of the game has a noticeable cohesion. I like how you chose to tint the background color differently throughout the story. It gave me a sense of mood change and progression through the times of day which gave me a deeper sense of immersion. Great job! I hope this is a game that you’ll come back to and keep working on at some point. This is a world that is definitely explorable and fun.