You need to fix up a lot of spelling. Spelling is a thing that can stop a lot of people from playing if it is really bad. Also, maybe use a more original idea. Waking up and everyone being mysteriously gone is not an interesting story and really isn't unique. In fact, most of the ideas in this game aren't unique, and the art style isn't either. Never-ending Nightmare did that style already.
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The story/plot is overused in the horror genre. While you did combine multiple stories, they are still just overused. But please remember that this is just feedback and doesn't mean you need to listen to it. That is the point of feedback, it's for people who've interacted with what you have created to say what they think, not what you think.