I did expect a funny Story about a lil girl mseeing with some incarnation of Death. Which this was...
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THe Twist at the End really had impact, but i like it. It makes somewhat sense within the universe and the its written really well. Most Characters had nice develepments within this short adventure. The only little downside was waking the old man, finding the correct word/spelling was a bit meh. Maybe allow more general fitting phrases.