I downloaded this because of the title image, it's a nice idea to use traditional water paintings as graphics for a Visual Novel, I liked that. The art was very charming in that style. The story is cute, as well!
If you want some criticism, as someone else already mentioned, I would have liked it to have music. Aside from that, more proofreading would have been good, there are many typos and some repeating words (one of the early food descriptions has "crisp" in it three times in a row, for example).
Overall, I enjoyed the game, good work!