Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated and the game is the 2d there):
Advantages:
1. The game had some really good scares and the monster was terrifying as well. The bathroom really creeped me out!
2. I liked that there were lots of lore. I couldn't really take time to read it while I was playing but I read everything upon editing the vid)
3. I liked that the game had voice acting from different characters! I think that's pretty neat!
Disadvantages:
1. I don't know why but the text of the notes would fade away after some short time. It was a bit annoying, maybe it would be cool fixing that.
2. I think the game could use some more work on pacing. The scares were really close to each other. I didn't have time to appreciate one as the other scare would pop up already. I think it would be nicer if there were a bit less scary moments (as when there are tons of them - they are not scary anymore), but they would be more powerful.
3. At the start of the video you can see that something was very wrong with the girl's physics. It was hilarious though.
Overall:
I think that the game is pretty good but could use some more work still. I think the scares being so closely together made the game less scary and I didn't really like that. Still, I think the game deserves 5/5 stars as a ton of work was clearly put into this project and there is a full version of the game out already.
Hope my feedback was useful!