Stop leaving cliffhangers that I can read like a book. Also for the morning talks with Lucy, I think it would be funny if she asks something like, "Can you be more stupid?" A good response could either be "If I tried." or a good old fashioned "Yes". But either way great update, work as fast you want. I think no one should dictate how you work. If you need a bit longer to put out an update that's fine by me. But yeah great pacing. And of course great story