Hi, Todd. Thanks for letting me try this out.
1. As a vain man? Of course. I like the cut of his jib. He seems to entirely understand his own vanity, and embraces it in kind. I like the options available, too! They all work.
2. No. You covered off on every angle, really! I'm just worried for the scope of your project.
3. Pacing feels fine. Though, the theatre route feels more like a speedrunner's route; it cuts short the talk with Henry and it generally has less dialogue and monologue than the other.
Aside from that, I like this! It feels fresh and interesting, but there are so many choices it's hard to say if I can be completely aware of any of them possessing any real influence on the story or if it's all just a personal thing.