Hi, Sarah!
Rebellious, cautious. I like her; she seems to be entirely aware that something is extremely wrong and that everything here is twisted beyond its true recognition. Relatable!
The ending feels like it'll be a test of willpower for poor Adelaide. She doesn't want to be Alice, and what with how perception and reality are being treated, I have no clue if anyone else even sees her as herself, either!
I'm very interested to see where this is going. It's quite long, too!
The mood was markedly grim; I was a bit surprised at the darkness you injected into what I recall as a relatively innocuous story.