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First of, this is very clear to me, the conversation is simple and well delivered in the good way, and I like how there are two different options that kinda just represent the two different attitude when the player speak to Lord Henry. For your question, maybe a third or even fourth choice would be good, but sometimes having a finished, consistent project is way better than just having the ambition of trying to good everything and not executing it well. So I guess it depends on the work load and the vision you had for the project, and it's your call. 

The pacing feels a little bit segmented, giving the length and the style of the choices are really similar for different sections, maybe you can vary the pace somewhere between here and there just to give readers some diversity to make them feel more nature reading the story.

Overall great stuff, Todd.