Hi there - really enjoyed! Very different to a lot of the other jam games :)
My feedback would be :
- Maybe worth going back over the speech to determine how much is useful to the player, it seems like there's not a way to win first time unless you're lucky. Think it would be better if we can feel more like detectives.
- Can more of the comedy come from the situation (circus) rather than each of the characters? Felt like the case and the dialogue was quite seperate
- The art is great! Can we see it used in different ways before the line up? Individual interviews?
Hope you have time to rate and give feedback on our game, MaizeGunner. Thanks!