The overall story between Izanagi & Izanami feels really touching. The relationship between the two and the conversations, the choices you gave to us in this kind of dialogue between two people with romantic interest feel very lifelike and emotionally charged. And I appreciate that sometimes you didn't players more than one options, and I feel like the change of the pace in such fashion definitely gives players a sense of real life, where sometimes you have a choice, but sometimes it seems like you do, but in reality you actually don't.
I appreciate that you are only giving really small chunks of word on each click, which makes the story more friendly to readers. The fact that you have a entire playlist with songs that play in the background based on the progression of the story is awesome. It intensifies the mood so much, and the songs are really dope. There are a lot of elements going on in the story. I was a bit lost with the Spear, the Cave, and the dream.