hi kaz!
I really enjoyed seeing more of this, and the party setting is great to explore. You build up a good in-world mythos surrounding Gatsby, which makes the player expect a really big payoff when the two finally meet. The most intriguing part to me was the library scene — much of the party blends together (not in a bad way, just in the way that parties tend to), but the encounter in the library is distinct from the rest, so I'm interested to see where that eventually leads. Some of the side characters don't have particularly unique voices, but it's hard at this point to tell which characters are making one-time cameos and which will have major story impact. Looking forward to seeing more!
-jess