hi beck!
I liked the Easter egg you hid in there — it got me to smile (especially the bonus "Please stop.") This is a really interesting evolution from your last prototype; in some ways, I found your last prototype more engaging in terms of prose, but I think this piece centers well around the "RESIST" moment. Your world-building is still really strong, and I'm interested in the new stronger focus on the Opalescence. I think there's maybe an opportunity to make the concept more engaging for the player by giving them choices in which they can decide what exactly the Opalescence is and what it means for the world. Great work!
-jess