hi ashley!
I'll keep these notes short, and give you more feedback on the complete version if you're updating that later! So far, the core tension is compelling — as the player, I wanted to know what was going to happen between Vronsky and Anna. However, Anna is a little bit of a flat character in my eyes right now. By far the most interesting tension is actually the one between the POV character and Karenin, so I'd love to see further exploration of that.
-jess