Hey Steven!
Wow- I really loved this whimsical game. The playfulness with the fonts, text fade ins, and sudden cuts was so fun to watch, and was thematically effective as a retelling of The Little Prince. The different cuts, pauses, and text placement was so compelling and exciting to read. I particularly loved the “follow the crowd” loop, where it continued to repeat until the player waited for the “Go home” link. There was a moment in the beginning where thought the game was over and almost exited, so I would suggest cutting this pause slightly to avoid the risk of someone leaving the game preemptively.
Your sense of humor is fantastic. I loved the calendar and the social media scrolling, and I think my favorite part hands down was the “jobs” in different font. What a neat way to bash the capitalist machine!
-Jude