Hey Kaz!
Your take on frat-ifying Gatsby was very fun! Your writing really carried over the characters well into this new vision of the story. Nick’s personality as a kind of average joe student and his wonderment as an outsider to the party scene was quite relatable.
I enjoyed how you allowed the player to seek more detail by clicking on words in the text blocks, and how these extra details could shape the tone of the story. This particular moment: when Nick walks into Gatsby’s house and realizes they’re the only one with an invitation— the bewilderment that follows worked both with or without knowledge of this extra detail which was a clever way of creating small, but compelling branches in the story.
Great game so far! Super excited to see where it leads.
-Jude