Hey Ashley!
There is so much tension in this story and the straightforward writing is so well suited to it. You’ve constructed a very unique tone for the game that conveys lots of complicated feelings in a short amount of time. I’d like to see more of Anna’s voice come through- I think doing so will make the dynamic between her and Karenin more exciting and will also reveal a lot more about Karenin’s character. I also felt like the perspective could get slightly confusing sometimes having switched between first and third person. I think some more intentionality with where these perspectives are placed in congruence with the clickable words/decisions will help clear this up (for example, 3rd person writing in the text blocks while with 1st person writing in the decision blocks).
I’m very excited to see the direction you take with the story- great job so far!
-Jude