I was able to play an early version of this game and it's interesting to see how the development has progressed. When I had first play-tested the game the art of the game was much more abstract and conceptual. I think that with this version, the story is clearer due to the details added to the background and the characters. I think that the game mechanics being used to help show the narrative is very clever! I think you could add more elements to help make the narrative more clear. The feeling created by the second character is very unique and reminds me of the burden felt during escort missions. I think the atmosphere of this game and the concept are very strong and if you choose to add to this game in the future, then adding to the narrative would elevate it.