So the writing is largely good. Characters are interesting, plot is fairly standard but engaging, just a few punctuation and capitalization errors here and there. Only two issues really stand out to me:
1. The animations are really uncanny. They tend to just jump out of what was a still image and that can be incredibly disconcerting. I about jumped out of my seat the first time what I thought was a still image started moving.
2. A lot of the choices aren't really choices. If you're given two options and one of those will lead to an immediate game over you might as well not have included a choice at all. It's pretty clear there's a direction the game wants you to go and many of the choices just feel like window dressing. I'd seriously considering either reworking where you're given options or possibly just making the thing a kinetic novel.
I give it a 3/5 so far.