This has a lot of promise. The art and animation are really great and the gameplay is pretty good. There's something weird about the way the camera scrolls, though. I can't figure out what's bad about it, but it's giving me a headache. I think it's juddering back and forth. Is it just me? Also, I hope you don't mind me saying, but the writing needs some serious editing and proofreading. It's currently very rambling and ungrammatical. Those two issues aside, this looks like it could become a great game. I'll follow your progress and wish you good luck!