Welcome to another comment of H *clap* Review *clap*! As the name state, I'll be stating pros and cons of this beautiful Hgame, Mythic Manor by Jikei. There are also 3 categories within the game I'd like to discuss, storyline, artwork, and character development ... (Of course, there may be spoilers here)
Overall Grade: 32/30 -- Would play again,
Storyline: 11/10 *Extra factor listed in "Extra Notes" section
There isn't really one big storyline I can talk about but my personal favorite would be Naira's storyline. When I was younger, I dealt with a lot of people who could relate to Naira to a degree. Small factors of self-doubt and because of that, being shy. I don't really know if I like the storyline because I relate to it or because it's been executed well (more likely than not, both!)
Artwork: 10/10
I'm typically not one for 3d models because many people don't know how to use it well (or I haven't found the right games, lol). However, in my experiences, the models in this game are perfect. Every Hgame I play, I go in with high expectations and this game, Mythic Manor did not disappoint. It went above my expectations for a game containing 3d models!
Character Development: 11/10
I'm someone who absolutely loves character development. Whether the characters go from annoying to caring or caring to annoying. There is a thin line on those transitions. Many people don't know how to implement it (Such as having a character break their role/character). Fanora is always bubbly and happy. Naira is reserved and shy. Velle is known for sex (Kinda hot, ngl). Esther is caring. And Nefari is the scientist. They. All. Stick. To. Character. Only breaking when necessary or when it's important to the storyline.
THAT is how you use literary elements to your advantage!
Extra Notes:
First off... The game is free. It's rare to find a game like that. And at a quality like this? Complaints should be at a minimum here.
Secondly... There are multiple storylines. It's hard enough to make a game with two/three different endings. To make a game with good quality details in each storyline would be more difficult than different endings (Of course, in my opinion. This is not objective).
Thank you for reading! I really can't wait for the future of this game. Though, I would become a patron, I no longer receive an income. This quarantine really takes a toll, huh? Stay safe ya'll and love yourself!