THIS COMMENT HAS SPOILERS. DONT READ UNLESS YOU HAVE BEATEN THE GAME
- Some quick comments.
- The dunk joke was so funny haha where our controls were all weird.
- I also liked the joke about the complaint book. (But actually the base's song slapped)
- Liked the song u used for the stealth missions too. Very good fit.
- Beat the landmine segment on my fourth try not to brag
- I actually really liked the dialogue so I talked to most people before I was even instructed to.
- Never got lost because you were so helpful with the reminders/directions/guidecharacters
- Sadly the Charlotte twist was given away when you didnt add her to the first list
- I think a throwaway justification from Prisha (forgot spelling) would have helped
- Chose to yeet Mei. Her and Poitr were v sus
- I played it risky until the last decision where I decided to redirect the missile
- Difficulty for the stealth segments was rly good and you introduced it well too with the chem lab segment.
Writing was very good. First playthrough took around 50 min. Def recommend and would play again. I can tell you put a ton of time into it.
My game was also a story focused game with 3 chapters. You should check it out I would love to know what you think of it.