I am french, and that was the problem, french to English or English to french, it was writed all the same.
And in french "la niche" is where the dog sleep ("kennel" or "doghouse" apparantly). And for that reason, I didn't realy understand why you say it is too niche.
And a game like that after 3 months (already ?), looking forward after 1 year.
For the "bodybuilder" it is because I don't know the correct word, but at last it was understandable.
For the person that will help keeping a human mind, do you think of making him/her like another girl, or master ? (maybe a bit more effeminate/womanish*, to maybe keep the idea of man=evil, woman=angel. And see how they fuck their girls, depanding on who we follow).
And for the building in the bottom center, do you already know what you will use it for ?
*Sorry, seem like my comment always lead to "a Trap" :D... Sorry for that one too.