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okay, good stuff first: The level design is really good, and the level of polish is unreal. Its very fun, suits the theme very well, and the puzzles are nice and challenging.

Now for the criticism:

In the second room, i spent about 2 minutes trying to figure out what the heck I'm supposed to do, until I accidently pushed the big box and realized that's what I'm supposed to be doing. the fact that it shows the controls at the beginning is great, but a bit of briefing on the mechanics would have also helped. Even just a few visual cues like a specific color means that an object is interactable would help a lot. 

The disappearing spikes are really punishing. You might be able to put your cursor somewhere to keep track of 1, but after that its just guessing, and randomly guessing distance while also being sent back to the start if you guess one wrong just isn't that fun.

The boxes that you need to move are really slow, I keep holding down left or right for 5 eternities and it ends up moving 2 cm. Just make it a tiny bit slower than the player.

There are 2 animations: Idle and Moving. There are no pushing animations, going into a door animations, or even jumping animations. The character feels a little stiff with just 2 animations, and pushing the boxes also look really weird.

The game is kinda devoid of sound. There's a jumping sound and thats it. If you were going for a kind of barren vibe, then there's ways to add more sounds without killing the vibe.

Theres no win screen. when you get trapped in the thing in the final level or go through the door then it justs kicks you back to the title screen, which feels a bit weird.

Conclusion: Most of these criticisms are just nitpicks in an otherwise really good game. Combine this with the fact that this was made in 48 hours AND this is a beginner jam, an you got one of the best games in the jam. My overall score is 5/5.

thank youuuu brooo i really love your critic, in 48 hours is the most hard difficult, really in love with your opinion ❤

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I had  similar problem, but my main was that when i incidentally go to the menu, i must to start at the beginning of the game, idk how

kkjj i dont have time to make a win screen so i make go to menu, but its goes strange